Jatmoz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Demanding Hollywood Boss]

The animation seems somewhat stiff, but it adds to the kind of... uncomfort feeling the boss gives off. I love this.

[Never Knew]

AAAA DAMMIT

[bun vs murderbot]

The artstyle is phenomenal and the animation is cool, if kinda short. But man, does the music not fit at all with what's going on, I would've chosen some more intense fast-paced stuff. Really unique aesthetic you got here though, it's intriguing.

Fred-Bird responds:

Ah, thank you! I was trying to get to the essence of my drawing style but in 3 dimensions, I'm glad it's at least pleasing.
That is the extent of my current musical ability, however, I'll get better haha!

[coronavirus video]

I think this is my favorite out of all the other shorts, well done.

[I'M JEW!]

The stop-motion animation is actually pretty good, I'd even say the characters you draw are interesting to look at, but to my preference the humor overall is pretty tasteless (of course though comedy subjective laddee laddee laddee), maybe you could do without the more shitposty parts like the bee movie thing and the 12 seconds of still text in the moral part.

[spanish class]

wavetro speaking in spanish badly

my life is complete

[Funny Moment In Rust]

Stuff like this, commentary/gameplay videos aren't really welcome in here. Original creations (Songs, animations, illustrations, games) are way more preferred. As a Youtube video it's pretty okay, good mic and audio quality, competent editing. But taking into account it's mostly gameplay footage and a static image of an anime girl on a bland background, it's not very good as an original thing.

[Wojak vs. Pepe: Burning Wojak]

For being an animation, it's pretty static. The only thing moving is the fire on Wojak. At least the images you chose are high definition, but this could've been better as a plain gif. Even then, there's no original artwork or anything. It's just a shitpost, a kinda boring one in my opinion. Props on not being needlessly edgy or offensive though, I've seen quite a few of those in here.

Seein' as its your first upload, it's an okay start. I just recommend to make something more characteristic and unique for this site.

llamaboy772 responds:

All fair criticism. This was indeed a shitpost that was made to be a gif, and the flash aspect was an afterthought because I realized that swf files didn't require any additional programs to make other than what I was already using. I just added music to it because somebody on 4chan said it would better with it, and did it to test out integrating sound with video since I'm new to encoding.

I appreciate your review though. Most sites would just downvote/call it shit/ignore it and move on with no real criticism.

[you got heart, kid]

I freakin' love the visual style oh my goodness

[The Body]

I honestly have no idea what this is even about. A man, paranoid about the existence of dinosaurs, and confident in his belief that he can't turn into one... and a picture of a fat man against the floor.

The lip sync seems alright, but the way the mouth itself moves seems choppy. The animation of the man is rigid and even a bit erratic, but with the hand and body movements you convey the emotion pretty well. Nice job on the face expressions too, you can see the utter paranoia and deeper conflict this man is suffering. Background is plain and boring, not gonna lie. Maybe they could be inside a house, or an interrogation room, idk.

I don't know what the hell this but you've got potential. Good luck on the future competitions and improving your skills!

JohnnyTurnips responds:

It was a contest and I spent 36 hours on it, so all of your criticism is valid and I’ll use it to grow.

Basically the competition is to use an 11 Second sound bite and make something of it. I’m still learning how to make my lip sync more natural so I’ll continue practicing. Thank you so much for your support!